miércoles, 21 de enero de 2015

THESIS STATEMENT:

Every day more and more people are addicted to technology and this is having consequences academically and especially for health.

martes, 20 de enero de 2015

COMPLETE ESSAY:


IBIZA

As a way of introduction, I want to clarify my purpose writing this essay: to encourage people to visit Ibiza if it is possible in Summer time since there is no an other better season throughout the year to visit it.
If I name the word "Ibiza", everybody can imagine the first and extremely stricking thing there: beaches. These are incredibly wonderful and transparent. Added to it,  they are famous because of their clear blue color which I could appreciate while we were sailing on our tiny rubber boat during a little journey to Formentera. As I mentioned before, beaches are perfect there and people are used to getting a tan everyday, it is so easy because of the sun intensity and the water reflection.

A part from Ibiza´s beautiful sceneries, we can enjoy of many diferent parties everywhere and everyhour. That is incredible too. When I came back home, I had to bring my family a lot of travel brochures to show them my experiences there and a lot of photos to prove all things that I told them.
Beside having gone with my cousin when we were only fourteen years, we had fun and enjoyed of activities which we will never forget.

I really encourage people to visit Ibiza, where you can enjoy of wonderful beaches, sceneries and parties, maybe the best of Spain. Moreover it is the perfect trip to take a break and forgetting the daily and work.
OPINION PARAGRAPH ABOUT ZOOS

As huge animals, they need sufficient space to survive in the nature. In that way, I don´t agree with zoo actions as locking up animals in cages where there are not confortable, a part of not being  their natural way of leaving. Added to it, breed animal is being affected because of zoos existence dissapearing little by little.From my point of view, reputable breedors would be necessary in zoos to avoid animal mistreatment, which is very common. Moreover, these breedors should unlock cages, giving freedom to animals twice a montch as minimum. Nowadays, some worried people about the problem, are running campaigns about it.

sábado, 10 de enero de 2015

DESCRIBE YOUR FAVOURITE PLACE

Venice, "the city of love", is considered one of the most beautiful and romantic places in the world.
I was there two years ago with my classmates for two weeks and without any doubt, it was fantastic all that I saw. Historical monuments, the streets as a river crossing the city, wonderful sceneries to see.. Added to it, food also was incredible, pizzas, pasta, icecreams, and many many more things that converted the trip in the best of my life.
About the people, they were so kind with us, moreover you could see a lot of couples walking on the streets, maybe celebrating an anyversary, or maybe due to a simple love journey. We could breathe the love in the environment.
I encourage people to visit Venice as soon as possible, and be careful everyone, you will fall in love with her!

jueves, 8 de enero de 2015

DESCRIBE SOMEONE


Marisa, my cousin, is the ideal person to describe. Physically, she is tall, a  brown hair girl, moreover she is thin with brown eyes. About her personality, she is  really worker at her studies and at her daily, She has so many good qualities as generosity, patience, wisdom and a lot of life experiences. Because of this, when I have a problem, she always helps me giving me the best advices and ways to resolve any trouble.
She and me live in Murcia. This is fantastic because I am close to her, also this is my first year in the University and I am lose yet, however this is her fourth year, she knows each corner of Murcia.It makes my life easier the first months.Without any doubt, she is a really wonderfull person to whom I love so much. All the people that know her,say nice opinions.